Evaluation of Rough Cut

Even though our rough cut was no where near what we wanted it to be, it still received some positive comments from the rest of the group. We felt that the rough cut needed more titles, we only managed to put one title on in time, we will probably also improve the font and positioning of the titles too. The clips were also not in the correct order, we rushed to put them into an order and it wasnt right. It also needed more editing and effects put on it. The music wasn't the music we wanted to use but we didn't have much time to find the exact music we wanted to use. We will also make it longer.

Comments:

• clown = creepy
• lighting and camera angles good
• no clear plot indication
• needs diegetic sound
• lighting on clownface amazing!
• titles with the background looked good